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To hide in sweet subtleness
and find pure innocence

The heart has been tried,
the poor mind scorched every second it lied

All for one forbidden moment
On your lips
Again, something I found scribbled at the side of a scrap piece of paper in one of my old books
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EiraCandles Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Amazing
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mspadfoot2 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Student Writer
I love poems like this. I've always found they are usually the most honest. This is fantastic! I love that even though the poem itself is bare-bones, you still manage to get some sensory detail in there. I'm a huge imagery junkie, so to me, that's fantastic. And your word choice is great, too!
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Kiari501 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you so much! that means a lot! =D
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